In the distance between life and death
in a moment called my life.......
I see this dusk and I see no more
Where the slanting rays of the sun sketch your portrait out for me.
I feel this wind and I feel no more
where the soothing bursts of breeze
brings your fragrance close to me
I hear your words and I hear no more
I hear your words and I hear no more
when you say love me.
I feel your warmth and I feel no more
of the time when you held me.
In this distance between life and death
in a moment called my life
I know no one just you my heart
I know no breath, no touch, no sound
I know no love than yours my soul.
And I live this moment forever.....
And I live this moment forever.....
6 comments:
it looks personal, intimate, nostalgic to me
simple thought
I like "slanting rays of sun .... for me"
and
"in the distance between life and death"
actually this line has potential depth, m not sure whether it is meant or not...
so good :)
It's gorgeous
Simply superb!!! Words are powerful and wonderful. Very well put.
it's beautiful....a lot of depth, pretty different from your usual, yet somewhere the essence remains...:)
hey good work swati...
came across ur blog jus 2day.. dont knw if u do remember me.. but v studied in Carmel 2gether..
keep up ur work!!
hey i really like this...your words simply carry me off into a flowing dream...good one mad scientist...
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