Monday, January 12, 2009

Immersion

And its a breezy night again..when the winds spoke to me..
told me stories of the enchanted..sang a lullaby to me..
The still waters have ripples on them today..
on them the moon light dances its way..
the leaves of fall rustle to break the silence..
and the ripples break on the shore..sharing their guilt in the offense..

I dip my feet in water...feeling the autumn grip me..
the ripples turn to waves..and judge the intruder in me..
I walk into the depths as the water welcomes me..
the breeze blows the hair off my face...reminds me this is maybe..not to be..
I defy directions..I defy words..I defy my breath..as the water touches my face...

In the distance...a lone bagpiper plays
a music just so alien..defying the rules of the night..
I open my eyes one last time...and watch the as the moon shines on me..
the words of the deep sound closer..as the wind plays the ripples..
And as I sleep the water embraces me...into the deep as I return to eternity...

4 comments:

Gina said...

realie awesome ...good work at writin stuff...realie kewl...i realie loved it...

NDEO said...

the last stanza is simply superb. its haunting, yet soothing. it defines feelings the way they appear in reality.

keep writing!!!

Anonymous said...

presentation of simple words in a magical way...superb...carry on:)

nihar said...

enchanting :)